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=My Year in Mrs.Boubou’s English class has been a huge mountain. When I first came to her class this year my writing was horrible and I was at the base of the mountain. My sentence structure was bad and I always used text language in my writing which made me lose points. Now I’ve risen to the top of the “mountain” in my writing. My writing and sentences are at the peak of where they need to be. During this yea my focus on a central idea has grown to the peak of success. Most of the time I would get off the main idea and I would lose points for it. I was very detailed in my work though. I would give good elaborations. My organization was good, I would plan out my work before I did it, but I would always end up talked about something besides my main idea. My work this year had a strong voice. It showed a vivid picture and attitude. My journal entries were probably my best example of my vividness. In my journal entries they give a vivid picture on my attitude and how I feel about things, which is where my strong voice comes into play. The journal entries were the one of the last things we wrote so my vivid voice has improved over the whole year. My usage and mechanics this year was really bad in the beginning. As the year went on I climbed the mountain as my mechanics improved and now I’ve reached the peak and my capitalization, spelling, punctuation, and formatting are at tip top shape. I used to always have incomplete sentences, bad grammar, and poor punctuation, but this year all that’s changed and I’m a really good writer now= .